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sweety123
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Posted: 2008-Mar-16 15:32
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Name of Site/Business: entertainment & forum

Site's Main Purpose: Advertising (eg Banners, Google Adsense etc.)

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?



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Quadrille
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Posted: 2008-Mar-16 19:45
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What's the point of registration?

As a first time visitor, there's no indication that I'm going to get anything extra.



dannykastelijn
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Posted: 2008-Apr-29 14:30
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Hi,

As a Dutch guy, I don't really know what your website has to offer when I land on the first page, I like the looks of your index, I'm not to sure about the next pages.

Maybe your website title should give more information.

Good Luck,

Danny




PhilipT
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Posted: 2008-May-01 21:38
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Hi Sweety,
I looked at the source for your home page and there does not appear to be any text for the SE's to use to index / classify the site.

The interior pages seem to have plenty of text content and they look fine to me. I think it likely that you are using too many keywords on each page and that you would be better off targetting a smaller number.

Best of Luck with the site

Philip



nhd4me
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Posted: 2008-May-02 01:35
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Hi Sweety

Similar to the previous comments, when I get to your home page, I find no information that entice me to enter any of the sub pages ... what I might find there etc?

Perhaps add some text on this page, not only will it give searchable content to the SE's but it will enhance the user experience.

Good luck with your website




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