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despoter
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Posted: 2008-Feb-05 05:06
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Name of Site/Business: mobile ringtones, wall papers, logos, games, pictures.

Site's Main Purpose: Advertising (eg Banners, Google Adsense etc.)

Please Review the following:
Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?



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Coool club has everything what a mobile phones needed. It has ring tones, wallpapers, screen savers, games, logos which suits for all kind of mobiles.




Quadrille
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Posted: 2008-Feb-05 05:39
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You site appears to have a Google ban: I could not find the domain on a regular search.

Or is it just very, very new with no incoming links?

However, I did find 196 sites with identical content.

Ouch!



beth_lk
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Posted: 2008-Feb-05 05:44
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Right away I noticed the nude woman and the middle finger images - not sure how most people will feel about these and will be willing to keep browsing the site - just my thoughts...

SE - you need a DOC and I did not see any H1-H5 ( headers ).

Oh yes, I wanted to ask why Verizon is not an option on your ring tone list? Do they not allow it? I know they are pretty big, so I was surprised to not see it there.

I never was able to find prices for anything on the site without actually placing an order.



business_directory
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Posted: 2008-Feb-05 23:22
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It looks like most of what one would need is on the front-page, so I don't think it does entice people to go further.

The yellow in the logo looks a bit fuzzy, you might want to give a little shade or something.

You can give your site better titles with keywords to get better results from google etc.

I hope this helps a little.


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