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gobob
Joined: Mar 09, 2007
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Posted: 2007-Mar-09 16:57
Name of Site/Business: Enhance Your Site
Site's Main Purpose: Ecommerce/Sales
Please Review the following:
Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?
Appearance/Attractiveness
Typos and grammar
Additional Comments/Notes
This is my first (nearly) one page site. I'd like to get suggestions about sales copy: benefits I missed, length, and other suggestions for improvement.
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bigbirdemma
Joined: Mar 15, 2007
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Posted: 2007-Mar-15 14:59
have you considered splitting it up into separate pages? It is a bit much for one page.
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gobob
Joined: Mar 09, 2007
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Posted: 2007-Mar-15 16:45
Thanks for your suggestion. 
I am currently running a split test between the original "long copy" page and an alternate page with most of the Clickbank material on a second page.
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